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Tragic Love
Contributed by
veenu
on
Friday, 24th September 2004 @ 04:52:51 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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no, you are thinking abide,
i know ,love for me ,
within you can't hide,
but still..but still,
dear i have to die;
cancer can't even touch my soul,
stop tear's they can sink the world whole;
after death i will be a star,
breath near you while i will be too much far;
when you will give me an eye,
i will give a little shy;
and i will twinkle my eyes,
in order to tell you iam survive,
i know,love for me ,
with in u cant hide,
but still...but still,
dear i have to die......................
but ,dear ,but about the solitude,
the moments without you will be rude;
always i will keep my eyes on you,
one day our dreams will come true;
you are saying true ,i know ,
but still dear, i have to go... i have to go;
on every step of you i will be your guide,
i know ,love for me,
within you can't hide,
but still..but still
dear i have to die........
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veenu
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Re: Tragic Love
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by ArdRi79 on
Friday, 24th September 2004 @ 11:21:26 AM AEST
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| a dark meaningfull write, it does strike a tragic note in my heart, well written |
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Re: Tragic Love
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by cocacola1331 on
Sunday, 14th November 2004 @ 09:28:02 PM AEST
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| This poem is very good, brought back a lot of fresh pain and almost made me cry. I hope you keep on writing, the words just really got to me... in a good way, though. |
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