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Talk to me (Part 2)
Contributed by
Archie
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Friday, 24th September 2004 @ 04:47:06 AM in AEST
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We all face pain from loved ones
who hurt us with words they say
The problem when we do not heal
is our conversations
The pride in us seeks from it''s hurt
to oft avoid the truth
I hope that in our hurt
that we won''t come to be confused
When heartaches come to me
my soul feels down
my first defense
protect my self from hurt
go run away be by myself
The problem is
that when I run
my heart gets stuck on low
I keep on sinking
in the void
of dissillusionment
Talk to me.
I''m on your side
I''m not your enemy
please do not hide
Talk to me
I am your friend
I know that you are hurt
please don''t give in
Oh when your hurt
I ask you please to talk to me
We all face horror
from the pain
that is within our past
We carry it like suit cases
so we will not forget
we shy away from people
who want to help us out
instead of throwing those
old suit cases out
Talk to me.
I''m on your side
I''m not your enemy
please do not hide
Talk to me
I am your friend
I know that you are hurt
please don''t give in
Oh when your hurt
I ask you please to talk to me
2nd verse added 9/24/05
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Archie
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2004-09-24 04:47:06]
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Re: Talk to me (Part 2)
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by Flipped_out on
Friday, 24th September 2004 @ 05:02:51 AM AEST
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Archie, this is wonderful to me..and could even be me
*sigh*.....
lovely
ty
Kell x |
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Re: Talk to me (Part 2)
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by sweetangeluk on
Friday, 24th September 2004 @ 03:36:36 PM AEST
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Talk to me.
I''m on your side
I''m not your enemy
please do not hide
Talk to me
I am your friend
I know that you are hurt
please don''t give in
Oh when your hurt
I ask you please to talk to me
Marvelous Archie we all say things we regret lashing out at our love ones.
Pushing them away making a distance between us.
What you have wrote was wonderful.....
Amazing loved your lyrics
Love Sweetangelukxxx |
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Re: Talk to me (Part 2)
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by Overstated on
Friday, 24th September 2004 @ 05:07:59 PM AEST
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| wow this poem was great archie - i loved all the lines - i thought you delievered your words in a intelligent manner. superb |
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Re: Talk to me (Part 2)
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by Essentially9 on
Friday, 24th September 2004 @ 10:36:14 PM AEST
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amazing. ::applauds:: actually no, brilliant. full of emotion and very powerful.
my favorite part was,
"We all face pain from loved ones
who hurt us with words they say
The problem when we do not heal
is our conversations
The pride in us seeks from it''s hurt
to oft avoid the truth
I hope that in our hurt
that we won''t come to be confused"
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Re: Talk to me (Part 2)
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by catz77 on
Monday, 21st March 2005 @ 08:21:06 PM AEST
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i agree with everyone
excellent poem
please comment on some of mine sometime
id gladly appreciate it
catz |
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