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Imagination Final
Contributed by
Bruce
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Friday, 24th September 2004 @ 01:30:55 AM in AEST
Topic:
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Imagination Final
The time is fast approaching
our meeting in real time
Imagination becomes a reality
once again sublime
Who could forget the last time
we held each other close
No imagination involved
the meeting was the most
Everything we did
and everywhere we went
It all felt so natural
the time so very well spent
We both look forward now
to what is coming next
The anticipation mounting
both knowing what to expect
We will make love as we did
and this time even better
No Imagination needed
down to the very last letter
The feelings we both have
just being with one another
We know it isn't possible
to get from any other
The time will come and go
In heaven we will be
Then Imagination takes over
until the next time each other we see
Copyright ©
Bruce
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2004-09-24 01:30:55]
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Re: Imagination Final
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by Kindredblood_dragon on
Friday, 24th September 2004 @ 04:30:00 AM AEST
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Such an exceptional write, very well done this poem held my eyes till the very end...
I loved it. and thank you for sharing.
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Re: Imagination Final
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by shelby on
Friday, 24th September 2004 @ 05:09:44 AM AEST
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very romantic indeed fantastic write once again Bruce
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Re: Imagination Final
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by inoc on
Friday, 24th September 2004 @ 07:51:05 AM AEST
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I was about to log off and saw your poem ...could not resist
so glad I read it before I finish for bed
E*x*c*e*L*L*e*N*t
we never tire of your poetry BRUCE
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Re: Imagination Final
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by shanarah on
Friday, 24th September 2004 @ 09:38:09 AM AEST
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Wow.... incredible once again, I never feel let down by your writes.. thank-you.
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Re: Imagination Final
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by pixie on
Friday, 24th September 2004 @ 10:04:20 AM AEST
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you are like a ray of sunshine on this site Bruce *hugs*
pixie xx |
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Re: Imagination Final
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by a_bear on
Friday, 24th September 2004 @ 11:10:19 AM AEST
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| great imagination. good write. |
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Re: Imagination Final
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by Jenni_K on
Thursday, 30th September 2004 @ 06:08:06 PM AEST
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Awww..did you have to let it end!! Oh well..I'll just have to use my imagination now...don't I?? lol..
Another great write...
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