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Why?
Contributed by
VonDutchChick08
on
Thursday, 23rd September 2004 @ 09:53:04 PM in AEST
Topic:
LoveRemembered
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I saw you with her today,
It made me want to cry
You say you love me
but I can't seem to say goodbye
I can't let you go
and you say the same about me
but why are you always with her?
why can't that be me?
I really, truely love you
and you call me your boo
but it wouldn't surprise me if you called her that too
My friends told me about you, and all the stupid **** you do
but I was dumb and ignored them
all because "I loved you", and thought your love was true
But now I see you with that girl,
the other one you call "your boo",
and tears well in my eyes
but I can't let you see me cry...
thats one thing I won't do...
cuz if you TRUELY loved me,
I wouldn't be crying over you
So, please don't say you love me
if its not true
because I just might do something crazy
like say "I love you too".
Copyright ©
VonDutchChick08
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2004-09-23 21:53:04]
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Re: Why?
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by MickeyPigKnuckles on
Thursday, 23rd September 2004 @ 10:01:01 PM AEST
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| This is an awesome poem of reality for so many girls that have guy's playing them as toy's. I am sorry you have to experience such ugly reality but it will help you to spot and see fakes and those out to use you which is not the way its supposed to be. I love your style and want you to know that many others do as well as you are so talented with your poetry. Please have a peek at some of mine and let me know what you think. Your Friend MickeyPigKnuckles :o) |
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Re: Why?
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by Kindredblood_dragon on
Friday, 24th September 2004 @ 05:33:09 AM AEST
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awesome poem although very sad in the way he is playing your feelings like sorrows harp, some guys just seem to think that they are gods gift to woment and that they can sting them along for the hell of it, its wrong as they know it but mostly dont care.
Thank you for sharing this poem, and I hope that one day you find your soul mate in true loves delight.
Take care always |
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Re: Why?
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by Trisha on
Saturday, 9th October 2004 @ 01:41:13 AM AEST
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Dang girl you're a good poet. I hope you don't mind me adding you as a buddy to my poetry site. I couldn't believe how good you're as a poet. My aim screen name is wTrisha1 and email is TrishaBong420@hotmail.com
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