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sell your seconds
Contributed by
serena
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Thursday, 23rd September 2004 @ 08:58:38 PM in AEST
Topic:
goodbyepoetry
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thrashing vicious sneers at passing
like shards of glass,
i woke up the living dead colossally mistsken
there was no contentment, only blood shed
despotic, infected, its your collective
you have taken your life away
your liberty is exchanged
Copyright ©
serena
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2004-09-23 20:58:38]
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Re: sell your seconds
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by Lee on
Thursday, 23rd September 2004 @ 09:01:57 PM AEST
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The Surreal eeL y'know Feel says:
Clarification! We need a little clarification here. Please, if you will, enlighten us as to the meaning of this poem's riddle.
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Re: sell your seconds
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by MickeyPigKnuckles on
Thursday, 23rd September 2004 @ 09:06:31 PM AEST
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| The message is clear to me and I think it would be to all people who have poetic talents. You are an awesome painter with your words of creative poetry. Your Friend MickeyPigKnuckles :o) |
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Re: sell your seconds
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by Essentially9 on
Thursday, 23rd September 2004 @ 09:51:41 PM AEST
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| powerful. |
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Re: sell your seconds
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by Spazzo on
Thursday, 23rd September 2004 @ 09:53:18 PM AEST
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| Awesome. |
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