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ask for me
Contributed by
serena
on
Thursday, 23rd September 2004 @ 08:19:15 PM in AEST
Topic:
ApologyPoetry
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Ask the angels who they calling,
ask them if they're calling for me
Ask the angels why they fallen,
if they fallen wont they please take me
Let them know who im missing
Wont you please render for me
oh come on i beg of thee...
my world comes tumbeling down
a sawn off tragedy, adeliverance in the city, a new beginning
for me
Copyright ©
serena
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2004-09-23 20:19:15]
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Re: ask for me
(User Rating: 1 )
by ArdRi79 on
Friday, 24th September 2004 @ 11:24:43 AM AEST
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| moving and a good read I like the rhyming structure you used it really drew me into the poem |
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Re: ask for me
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by thelmerichs on
Wednesday, 6th October 2004 @ 01:12:16 AM AEST
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| I feel your poem everyday I like it alot |
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