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I love you
Contributed by
Archie
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Thursday, 23rd September 2004 @ 06:27:30 PM in AEST
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Like the flower needs rain
and sunlight to sustain. I need you
Rainbows after a storm
bring glad tidings galore. I love you
Living, loving, laughing,
lingering in the emotion of the moment
Praying, hoping, dreaming,
longing for the chance
to hold you in my arms
Like the moon in the night
and the stars shining bright. I love you
Like the tree grows upright
and casts shade by its might. I love you
Lulling lullaby
softly sung by
a mother comforting her baby
Hands are holding
first steps unfolding
you don't have to be afraid
I will take care of you
The wind softly blows
perfume tempts my nose
the bueaty of you
is it's own melody
playing on me
captivating
making my heart long impatiently
All my life I have waited for you
hurting grieving wondering too
Now that i have you I won't let you go
honey I love you, I want you to know
Copyright ©
Archie
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2004-09-23 18:27:30]
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Re: I love you
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 23rd September 2004 @ 06:50:58 PM AEST
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That is a very close description of true love. You are on the right track. Beautiful poem.
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Re: I love you
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by Elena on
Thursday, 23rd September 2004 @ 07:21:33 PM AEST
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Very soft and sweet, I can only hope your dream comes true.
E |
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Re: I love you
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by Dorian on
Thursday, 23rd September 2004 @ 07:41:55 PM AEST
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| Beautiful poem . . . Dorian : ) |
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Re: I love you
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by ladyfawn on
Thursday, 23rd September 2004 @ 10:51:02 PM AEST
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archie, this is so beautifully romantic, hugs n' love nessa
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Re: I love you
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by sweetangeluk on
Friday, 24th September 2004 @ 03:45:25 PM AEST
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A beautiful poem.
I hope it comes true for you
Love Sweetangelukxxxx |
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Re: I love you
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by SocialMisfit on
Saturday, 25th September 2004 @ 12:50:43 PM AEST
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wow man i love this!!! this poem is awsome i love your style and was a very enjoyable read, 3 times in a row, lol gj.
SM |
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Re: I love you
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by Kindredblood_dragon on
Sunday, 26th September 2004 @ 08:53:25 AM AEST
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| This is so beautifully captivating, I was mezmerized by every word, and astounded by the love that virtually flowed from the overall write....Loved the way this song just seem to flow with its own energy, awesome. |
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Re: I love you
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by Lee on
Monday, 27th September 2004 @ 05:59:37 AM AEST
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Poet at Inustrial Colosseums Unbound
Says:
This poem just oozes with creativity!
Well organized thoughts in a unique combination layout of rhymed verse and free verse.
A bright and shining gem!
Jolly Good Show! |
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Re: I love you
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by inoc on
Monday, 27th September 2004 @ 06:28:14 AM AEST
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your love is captivating
written from your heart
cheers!~ |
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