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Speckles
Contributed by
brew
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Thursday, 23rd September 2004 @ 05:51:06 PM in AEST
Topic:
fantasy
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We are off the the ball of flowing and dreams
With our bo and dog, and all the feelings
We enter the room and all seem to look
Wonder if you, actually, put the petticoat up
Whispers and sneers , seem to catch the eye
And all are saying what a "hot peach pie"
You get up the nerve to say.......What the heck"?
And then, you know..........they are in speckle mess.....................
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2004-09-23 17:51:06]
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Re: Speckles
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by Lee on
Thursday, 23rd September 2004 @ 07:58:21 PM AEST
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The Surreal eeL y'know Feel says:
This is a delightfully weird poem.
Favorite line:
"And then you know......they are in a speckle mess............"
Well done! |
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Re: Speckles
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by AspenGlow on
Friday, 24th September 2004 @ 08:43:12 AM AEST
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ah yes .......speckle mess and "hot peach pie" and comments galore by the score off on the side.........whispers and sneers, petticoat pull ups, and chaps all turned down........and everyone actin the clown......tis a kleenex romance on the spot....then off to a whimsical thought.
Excellent description, very, very nice indeed.
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