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I Know A Timid Place
Contributed by
thumbsucker
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Thursday, 18th July 2002 @ 06:42:31 AM in AEST
Topic:
InspirationalPoems
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I know a boastful place of deeds long done.
It`s echos of battle still scent the air.
I know a happy place, a place of fun.
I know I`ll always find my smile there.
There`s a place with melancholy in the air,
where young lovers kissed before they parted.
I know a thoughtful place, a place of prayer,
where I feel humble and warm hearted.
I know a timid place, it`s now so small.
It once was brave and open, now it`s shy.
It once was huge with room enough for all.
Now it just wants to hide away and die.
I know a timid place. You knew it too.
It cared for all. A part of it was mine.
This place is buried, scared within you.
Let it beat again. You were meant to shine.
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thumbsucker
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2002-07-18 06:42:31]
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Re: I Know A Timid Place
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by humphdj on
Thursday, 18th July 2002 @ 07:04:56 AM AEST
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This is excellent
Glad to see you posting again
Rgds
Dave |
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Re: I Know A Timid Place
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by Chrissie on
Thursday, 18th July 2002 @ 08:15:58 AM AEST
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This is so very beautiful Gary and I think is my favourite of yours now. Please don't stop this writing...
Chrissie x |
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Re: I Know A Timid Place
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by S_K_Williamson on
Friday, 19th July 2002 @ 04:58:14 PM AEST
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This is wonderful. I hope you enjoy your summer. I also hope that you come back soon for you will be missed.
Great write my friend,
Sharon;) |
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Re: I Know A Timid Place
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by Wiccan on
Monday, 22nd July 2002 @ 01:38:18 AM AEST
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This is really good. I like it alot. I have to look for more of your stuff!
~Wiccan~ |
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Re: I Know A Timid Place
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by ginsdance on
Thursday, 1st August 2002 @ 02:07:34 PM AEST
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Let it shine! This is another great poem from you! You say you're impressed with my maturity... well I'm imprssed with your writing. This is terrific!!!!
Ginsdance |
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