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Glassy Survival
Contributed by
Inevitable
on
Thursday, 23rd September 2004 @ 02:57:19 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Walking on shards of glass
While everyone else seems to pass
So oblivious, they can't even see
All the things that have happened to me
Blood falling from every step I take
Mourners yearning for me to wake
Eyes open, yet so cold
Too bad I didn't do, all I was told
Sirens blare as I begin to stir
Wanting to see but my eyes have to blurr
Distorted images come to mind
In my head I try to figure out what happened, try to rewind
I'm still alive
I had to survive
Someone's at my side, holding my hand
Forcing myself, I get up and stand
Walking on shards of glass
But nothing can hurt me, I'm safe at last.
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Inevitable
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2004-09-23 14:57:19]
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Re: Glassy Survival
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by ArdRi79 on
Friday, 24th September 2004 @ 11:27:36 AM AEST
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| God this is great, you really expressed something deep here I relate too well done |
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Re: Glassy Survival
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by Red_October on
Monday, 15th November 2004 @ 02:04:35 PM AEST
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| Beautiful & painful image, catchy title. Tiffany J. (Red_October) |
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Re: Glassy Survival
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by Essentially9 on
Monday, 21st February 2005 @ 04:12:12 PM AEST
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| never stop writing and posting. |
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Re: Glassy Survival
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by blueeyedevil13 on
Friday, 11th March 2005 @ 05:50:12 AM AEST
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| so gripping and powerful. it amazes me even after ive read it 20 times. ^-^ |
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