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Moon in the Street
Contributed by
Daniella
on
Thursday, 23rd September 2004 @ 02:07:15 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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And calmly it brushes against my lips
And there’s this look that’s a lot like smiling
Like you’re falling as this slips
Into a new kind of blue
A new kind of sky
And it seems like this rain feels a lot like you
We can’t escape the storm under a sky like this
A tragedy that seems to insist
And I’m haunted
And I know I should try to wait
And I know you see me through the veil
And I know I’m a little late
Or maybe just too soon
I’m not quite sure
But I know I miss you
Did I ever think of you?
Yes
No
I never tried to reach you in your minor key
Or touch your nirvana…I promise
You tried to crystallize me
I’m too unreal
I kicked the moon further down the street
She landed in a puddle…in a way I may be trying to drown her
Maybe then the pain might not feel so concrete
I know you can feel me staring
Through the curtain of my hair
You turn your back without caring
And I should be going home
Tell me why I’m still here
Just forget everything
There’s nothing you have to do
Just stay with me a little while
As the rain turns my hair a darker black
I gaze down at my feet
You turn your face towards the sky
If you’re looking for the moon…
She’s somewhere down the street
Copyright ©
Daniella
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2004-09-23 14:07:15]
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Re: Moon in the Street
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by MickeyPigKnuckles on
Thursday, 23rd September 2004 @ 02:13:16 PM AEST
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| What an awesome poem created by such a talented poet. I really enjoyed your creative words of art. We all want to thank you for sharing your poetic talents with us. Please have a peek at some of mine and let me know what you think. Your friend MickeyPigKnuckles :o) |
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Re: Moon in the Street
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by tbird on
Sunday, 14th November 2004 @ 11:54:27 AM AEST
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| Wow! It's not often I come across a totally fresh perspective. Unusual imagery. Sad and beautiful. Thank you so much for sharing. |
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Re: Moon in the Street
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by justjonesy on
Sunday, 14th November 2004 @ 10:56:00 PM AEST
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| Beautiful....you have a really original way of writing...kept me in it the whole way through....I hope to read some more form you soon |
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