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When Everything Changes
Contributed by
brokensoul
on
Thursday, 23rd September 2004 @ 01:54:16 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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all that seemed right
quickly turned wrong
day turned to night
to pain I belong
bright fluffy clouds over my head
quickly turn black
the blue sea turns red
with hell's soldiers waiting to attack
shes running and screaming
hes chasing and smiling
the blood on his knife is gleaming
her fear is piling
a new color is born
its called devastation
my penalty is sworn
in rising damnation
the moon is rising
bloodlust is coming
the bats are flying
I can hear the gentle maiden humming
pale and unreal
her wounds are shared
I distinctively feel
causing me to grow slightly impared
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brokensoul
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2004-09-23 13:54:16]
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Re: When Everything Changes
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by MickeyPigKnuckles on
Thursday, 23rd September 2004 @ 01:58:28 PM AEST
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| Another outstanding creation by a wonderful poet. Your style is awesome so please keep the ink flowing. Its important for you to know that we all appreciate you and your creative poetry. Your friend MickeyPigKnuckles :o) |
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Re: When Everything Changes
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by poetic_ire on
Monday, 27th September 2004 @ 10:09:58 PM AEST
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| very awesome Ash. One of your best. |
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