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Message of Questions
Contributed by
brokensoul
on
Thursday, 23rd September 2004 @ 01:44:22 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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your love is so strong
you had to let me go...
for my sake...
because my father was beating me
but it was worth it
instead of hurting occasionally
i am hurting now every second every hour
every day
why?
why did you leave me?
i am so confused
i wont ever love anyone like i love you
its building up inside me
i cant make it stop
its not fair
so much pain
not fair
its so hard to handle
i dont know if i can handle it
what do you do when everything you were living for
just vanishes?
how did you expect me to cope with this?
didnt you think this through?
i cant do this with out you
please
i love you
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brokensoul
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2004-09-23 13:44:22]
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Re: Message of Questions
(User Rating: 1 )
by MickeyPigKnuckles on
Thursday, 23rd September 2004 @ 01:53:53 PM AEST
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| This is an excellent poem by a very creative poet. When you inject true emotions into your works the end result is perfection and I really appreciate your speaking heart. Please have a peek at some of mine and let me know. Your friend MickeyPigKnuckles :o) |
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Re: Message of Questions
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by inoc on
Thursday, 23rd September 2004 @ 05:04:47 PM AEST
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I love the questions
of this brilliant poem
your a pure natural poet
cheers! |
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