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Desire
Contributed by
dak
on
Thursday, 23rd September 2004 @ 01:21:53 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Words float on pages
Transcribing time and experience
Naked eye recording the unseen
Lava flows
Churning passion
Raw burning
Waiting for the blind fold to cover watchful eyes
Allowing us to be free.
Copyright ©
dak
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2004-09-23 13:21:53] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Desire
(User Rating: 1 ) by FleurdeSang on
Thursday, 23rd September 2004 @ 03:40:57 PM AEST (User
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Absolutely perfect! So much was said, with only few words... You have much talent, it shows in this masterpiece! I love it! Thank you for this incredibly enchanting write, Dak! I wish I could say more, but I have no words to describe how utterly magnificent this is!
FleurdeSang *Still under the spell* |
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