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Lover Without A Face
Contributed by
ShadowsCloud
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Sunday, 10th November 2002 @ 09:00:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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He came to me in my dreams
climbing the highest ladder
wanting me, needing me,
loving me...
I tried to love others
but none could trill
me the way my dream
lover could...
None could bring out the
passion and fire I would
fell at the touch of this
mysterious lover...
Then I met him, all became
clear, it was not a dream,
it was our souls reaching
our for each other...
We loved, we played, we
laughed, we found happiness,
very few will ever know so
much in love we were...
It's over now, he is gone, I
am back where it all began in
my dreams, only now my lover
has a face...
Copyright ©
ShadowsCloud
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2002-11-10 09:00:00]
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Re: Lover Without A Face
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by Valerie_Pearson on
Sunday, 10th November 2002 @ 09:05:31 AM AEST
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| Nice write, find another if you can, and I'm sure you will there are many more out there, |
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Re: Lover Without A Face
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by Poetic_Angel on
Sunday, 10th November 2002 @ 10:14:02 AM AEST
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| cute poem. i like it a lot. keep up the good work |
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Re: Lover Without A Face
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by Nazaholic on
Sunday, 10th November 2002 @ 12:13:09 PM AEST
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| this is great |
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Re: Lover Without A Face
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by Unaekseveer1 on
Thursday, 21st November 2002 @ 08:05:09 AM AEST
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This is lovely Cadice,
a bit sad in the ending, but at least you have the knowledge of what/whom you're looking for, not many have that!
You got good feelings into this one, again splendid.
With love
Dean:-) |
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Re: Lover Without A Face
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by ShadowsCloud on
Thursday, 21st November 2002 @ 08:27:39 AM AEST
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Dean, thank you for your kind words. I think that I have always known what I am looking for. I'm not sure I can explain that, but I do think that I have always known. Hopefully I have finally found what I'm looking for. I say FINALLY like I'm really old. I'm only 20, so if I haven't found it there's still time.
ShadowsCloud |
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Re: Lover Without A Face
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by Unaekseveer1 on
Thursday, 21st November 2002 @ 08:43:07 AM AEST
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I don't know Candice,
You only have about another seventy or so years, you'd better hurry up!!Hehehe
You're in a better position than I, I'm like 31going on 90 already!
Only kiddin, plenty of time, I hope!
With love
Dean;-) |
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Re: Lover Without A Face
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by ShadowsCloud on
Thursday, 21st November 2002 @ 08:55:31 AM AEST
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Dean, you have plenty of time. My mom is 39 and she is very happily engaged to a wonderful man. And she thought that she would never get married again. So you see anything is possible.
ShadowsCloud |
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