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Kiss You And Whisper
Contributed by
MickeyPigKnuckles
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Thursday, 23rd September 2004 @ 12:42:10 PM in AEST
Topic:
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SultryRose's Signatures
" Kiss You And Whisper "
If the sun decides to no longer shine
It's OK, cause I won't whine
I have the beauty within Your face
Lighting My world with Your glowing grace
If the Bird's stop singing their songs
It's OK, cause nothings wrong
I have the beauty of Your soft voice
Causing My heart to totally rejoice
If this old world becomes too cold
It's OK, cause I have You to hold
I'll run to You with My warm embrace
As I kiss Your pretty face
If the stars don't shine at night
It's OK, cause its all right
I have the love glow in Your eyes
My sweet Woman, You're My prize
If there is no more air to breathe
It's OK, we'll be Together to leave
I'll take My last breath holding You
Kiss You And Whisper, I Love You!!!!!
By James L. McHenry
Copyright ©2003 James L. McHenry
Copyright ©2003 By Mickey Pig Knuckles
© 2003 Mickey Pig Knuckles (All rights reserved)
Copyright ©
MickeyPigKnuckles
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Re: Kiss You And Whisper
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by Stitch on
Thursday, 23rd September 2004 @ 01:18:28 PM AEST
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Woah, she's wearing those boots!
No wonder you are after her!
Nice work.
Stitch |
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Re: Kiss You And Whisper
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by shelby on
Thursday, 23rd September 2004 @ 02:34:50 PM AEST
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very lovely she will like this
Michelle |
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Re: Kiss You And Whisper
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by Adonia_Donata on
Thursday, 23rd September 2004 @ 03:59:56 PM AEST
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| If I ever had the priveledge of someone writing a poem for me, I'd want it to be just like this. |
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Re: Kiss You And Whisper
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by FleurdeSang on
Thursday, 23rd September 2004 @ 04:15:45 PM AEST
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Mickeypigknuckles, this is truly beautiful and very sweet! Any girl would love this! She is very lucky! Gorgeous words, splendiferous pictures! She will surely love this! May your relationship last forever, and your love for each other, a lifetime... All myl love and blessings to you both! Good luck!
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Re: Kiss You And Whisper
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by Twitch06 on
Thursday, 23rd September 2004 @ 06:29:58 PM AEST
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| I really like this, and im also returning a comment :). But i feel almost like that, but towards a guy that i like. And i also like the ryhming couplets that you used. *just learned that in english :-D* well anyways, great rite and keep up the excelent work, ur friend, Kristen ~ Twitch87 |
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Re: Kiss You And Whisper
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by BrandySwanson on
Thursday, 23rd September 2004 @ 09:39:22 PM AEST
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oh this was so beautifully written I know she'll love it cause I sure did. great job
Brandy |
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Re: Kiss You And Whisper
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by ladyfawn on
Thursday, 23rd September 2004 @ 10:05:07 PM AEST
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very pretty:) hugs n' love nessa
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Re: Kiss You And Whisper
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by inoc on
Friday, 24th September 2004 @ 05:57:13 AM AEST
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Out Of THis World,,,
so beautiful
I love love love it
cheers! |
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Re: Kiss You And Whisper
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by shanarah on
Friday, 24th September 2004 @ 09:30:47 AM AEST
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By far is this write very elegant and tasteful...
it elevates my spirits.. thank-you
your friend, shanarah |
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Re: Kiss You And Whisper
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by LouisaMontagu on
Friday, 24th September 2004 @ 09:42:17 AM AEST
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spectacular..!! you have managed to paint another picture with such captive words, This is my favourite one!! welldone
Louisa x |
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