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Shine

Contributed by x_midnight_x on Thursday, 23rd September 2004 @ 11:43:31 AM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

Another day born by a sun that doesnt shine on my dreams...
A life left to live alone your words stollen away from me,
Like blank pages of a book i'm empty.
Growing cold on my own i feel the chill set into my bones,
permiating every cell although no one can tell.

Waiting for a letter in the post..
it's like grieving a ghost that i cannot see...
You have totally crushed and mesmerized me.

I drag along all my days in your memorable haze...
looking at pictures of your face through a teary eyed glaze.
I sit and retrace where we fell out of place,
but theres nothing to chase..times frozen in space.

I breath in and breath out but i'm living without...
your hugs and your heart and its torn me apart.
How can i try when i'm just getting by...

Maybe tomorrow the sun will rise in kindness,
show me again my dream and forgive all my blindness.

I cant believe that my hearts on my sleeve,
I'm such a fool its impossible to perceive that its true...
No more me left to live no more wonderful you.
Still its hard to let go and i'd want you to know,
that your smile will eternally be..The greatest gift given to me.

Copyright © x_midnight_x ... [ 2004-09-23 11:43:31]
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Re: Shine (User Rating: 1 )
by MickeyPigKnuckles on Thursday, 23rd September 2004 @ 04:48:37 PM AEST
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Just wanted to let you know that by injecting your emotions into your poetic creations makes perfection shine. Great job. Thank You for sharing yourself and your awesome talents with all of us. Please have a look at some of mine and leave a message. Your Friend MickeyPigKnuckles :o)

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