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MOLTEN ANGER!
Contributed by
deathdrop
on
Thursday, 23rd September 2004 @ 10:59:51 AM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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This is it.
I just wanna blow.
Let it out,
Let my feelings go.
‘Coz I’ve had enough,
Of every little thing!
All it’ll take now,
Is for you to start at me.
I’m close to snapping,
So when I break I’ll let it out.
‘Coz its hie-time,
You saw was I’m really about.
And I’m NOT,
About to let you win!
I’ll give you pain.
Proper reasons to slit your skin.
I’ll send you down ‘the path’.
Of just wanting to die.
‘Coz you hate living,
And you’re too numb to try
I’ll break your bones.
I’ll put you in hospital!
And then leave you with ‘the threat’
Dobb and I’ll make YOU fall!
Molten anger,
Is bubbling holes inside.
I’m too stressed out,
To just sit down and cry.
‘Coz I’ve had enough of you,
And your twisted little group.
So you start ONE more time,
And I’ll knock you to your graves stones!
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deathdrop
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2004-09-23 10:59:51]
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Re: MOLTEN ANGER!
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by blackholesun on
Thursday, 23rd September 2004 @ 11:20:42 AM AEST
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| man you are ***** why?you cant let people make you feel bad so easy!not anyone!im sorry for you,if you need a friend im online now. |
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Re: MOLTEN ANGER!
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by Kindredblood_dragon on
Saturday, 25th September 2004 @ 09:18:42 AM AEST
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Ive been down this road before, and lost the plot, let my anger win, put a few in hospital, months before they got out....They fear me still to this day.....sadly i also lost alot of cool friends because I became what they were to me...I became the bully, well go figure.
Got expelled from school had a prick of a time getting into another.
I can see where you are coming from, and dont blame you for taking such actions...just remeber for every action there is usually a negative reaction...I payed for it...dont make the same mistake I did.
Please dont take my comment as an insult ot the poem...Its just I really felt this poem down deep. |
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