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Strive For Success Like A Beautiful Rose
Contributed by
inoc
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Thursday, 23rd September 2004 @ 05:58:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
DreamsandWishes
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the sweet scent
of a beautiful rose
in full bloom
control's the magical sence
of beauty
stealing every desire needed
to climb the mountain
aiming for the inner beauty
of success
the soft perfume
oozes onto ones silky skin
correct silence can cleanse thee
wrapping the feeling like a pearl necklace
just perfect for noticing images of brilliance
hold that feeling ike a pausing whisper
remenber each magical moment
and store it for your future
that tingling sensation on every nerve
that impulses temptation of success
discover the moment of time
and focus on another beauty
scan around to see more excellence
together we can string the pedals together
like frendship is precious to the soul
carry your light heart and walk on tippy's
to your glorious destination
before time runs out
like a dried up rose
forgotten in a milky vase
take that image you desire
and strive for it completely
don't let anyone disharten you
every second counts
because you are worth it!
Copyright ©
inoc
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2004-09-23 05:58:00]
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Re: Strive For Success Like A Beautiful Rose
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by Kindredblood_dragon on
Thursday, 23rd September 2004 @ 06:08:02 AM AEST
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So beautifully woven together, you have captured the very essence of the poems nature and made it very alluring to read. I am sure many will be given to confidance to achieve their most desired dreams.
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Re: Strive For Success Like A Beautiful Rose
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 23rd September 2004 @ 07:33:01 AM AEST
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Coni, I love this. This is what my family instilled in me as a child and i, in turn, instilled in my sons. It has always carried me through, even in the hardest of times in my life. This is an excellent write.
Hugs,
Rita |
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Re: Strive For Success Like A Beautiful Rose
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by Bruce on
Thursday, 23rd September 2004 @ 07:38:15 AM AEST
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| How True i hope many read it and follow it, even better, great write |
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Re: Strive For Success Like A Beautiful Rose
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by PumpkinPie on
Sunday, 26th September 2004 @ 07:57:42 PM AEST
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You are absolutely right and you wrote it all in a beautiful way.You pumped me up some more,which I needed right now.
Great job~
PumpkinPie |
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