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Our love, within four walls..................
Contributed by
ravisada
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Thursday, 23rd September 2004 @ 05:55:49 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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I want to be alone with you within four walls
We could make our love story within these walls
We could share our love with lots of feelings
without no one knowing our inner secret
My heart is aching for your love and want
our dreams to turn into reality within these walls
Your kisses could make me passionate
and we could enjoy the art of love making
Your hugs can bring our hearts closer
and we could be happy with our love within these walls
We could love each other for many years within these walls
But our love will be spring for ever within these walls
These walls could hear our voice and watch at us
But it keeps all the secrets within these four walls.
Ravi Sathasivam / Sri Lanka
Copyright @2004 Ravi Sathasivam
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ravisada
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2004-09-23 05:55:49]
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Re: Our love, within four walls..................
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by Kindredblood_dragon on
Thursday, 23rd September 2004 @ 06:15:20 AM AEST
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| Awesome write, very romantic, thanks for sharing. |
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Re: Our love, within four walls..................
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by Bruce on
Thursday, 23rd September 2004 @ 07:40:31 AM AEST
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| great four walls, good write and lots of love in there |
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