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still drowning
Contributed by
grip-wth-broken-fingers
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Thursday, 23rd September 2004 @ 05:11:24 AM in AEST
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the words that you have spoken
the memories that you have tried so hard to revive
all these things are bent mostly broken
these memories mean nothing at all
i know that al the things u promised
didnt mean a ***** thing
and all the years you said we,d be o.k
i never knew every day u wished it would end
trying to take your own life in front of my eyes
trying so hard to hurt urself
trapped in your own demise drowning but you wouldnt ever take my hand
now your all better i,m still drowning trying to understand
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Re: still drowning
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by Kindredblood_dragon on
Thursday, 23rd September 2004 @ 06:22:03 AM AEST
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A very intense read, very emoitonal to behold, I hope you find the understanding and healing so much seek.
Take care always |
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Re: still drowning
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by Flipped_out on
Thursday, 23rd September 2004 @ 06:53:25 AM AEST
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A from the heart fantastic write gripped..so very powerfull and moving
Love ya x |
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Re: still drowning
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by Broken_Skin on
Thursday, 23rd September 2004 @ 07:12:14 AM AEST
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upsetting
i give you my pity
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