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Where is the Sun (Autumn's theft)
Contributed by
Hurretje
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Thursday, 23rd September 2004 @ 04:18:47 AM in AEST
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Where's the nourisher of life?
Where's the Sun that once shone bright?
Where's the fair force to survive?
Who's been robbing of the light?
Alas! Darkness and night
Belched greedy grey white
That swallowed my rainbow
In stretches of pale snow
I'd given up hope
On restoring what's been
O, how could I cope
With a world without green
But then, from the South
On rejoicing wings
Fulfilled, wise and proud
Came in gentle Spring
As melted the cover
Of my unwanted lover
The numb veil was torn
And I was reborn
Under the golden globe
Clad in this nacrous rain
And a flashy new robe
I lost myself in my domain
But then, my Old Rome
Was brought down with a crack
Covered by a dark dome
And the darkness came back
There's the nourisher of life
There's the Sun that once shone bright
There's the fair force to survive
Once again in Autumn's might
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Hurretje
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Re: Where is the Sun (Autumn's theft)
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by Kindredblood_dragon on
Thursday, 23rd September 2004 @ 06:51:02 AM AEST
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So brillantly written Hurretje, with so much unleashed beauty, and such color, even when the darkness returned, you still had a way of making the overall poem flow with such an awesome rythem, definately a 5* for this, I loved it. an awesome compliment to the first autum poem you wrote earlier.
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by venkat on
Thursday, 23rd September 2004 @ 07:39:50 AM AEST
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| Dark and fantastic..enjoyed this greatly.venkat |
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Re: Where is the Sun (Autumn's theft)
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 23rd September 2004 @ 07:41:43 AM AEST
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this is an excellent follow-up to the prior piece. This is, on its on, a marvelous piece of work.
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Re: Where is the Sun (Autumn's theft)
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by ladyfawn on
Thursday, 23rd September 2004 @ 11:05:25 PM AEST
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again, truely beautiful, i love your style and flow here, an exquisite poem:) hugs n' love nessa
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Re: Where is the Sun (Autumn's theft)
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by emystar on
Saturday, 25th September 2004 @ 06:04:19 PM AEST
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I agree with everyone else very good writing.
luv, huggs, smiles,
emy |
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Re: Where is the Sun (Autumn's theft)
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by lovingcritters on
Thursday, 30th September 2004 @ 09:29:35 PM AEST
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Well my friend Hur, you've done again..in this poem!!! Explaining away the sun, and then bringing it back.....what a marvelous way you have with words, and the pictures you show my Mind's Eye are enthralling in all their dazzling beauty and simplicity!!!
Back it comes in Autumn's might!
Splendid write
BRAVO this was exceptional again!
Warm hugs
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Re: Where is the Sun (Autumn's theft)
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by Stitch on
Friday, 8th October 2004 @ 07:55:53 AM AEST
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A delightful ode to this "between" time of year. Bravo! I am continually amazed at the range and breadth of your writes.
Stitch |
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Re: Where is the Sun (Autumn's theft)
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by Fionndruinne on
Thursday, 14th October 2004 @ 03:06:51 AM AEST
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Brilliant this is! I love the image
But then, my Old Rome
Was brought down with a crack
Very nice work. Keep it up, friend.
Andrew |
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