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COLORING AUTUMN
Contributed by
lovingcritters
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Thursday, 23rd September 2004 @ 02:10:45 AM in AEST
Topic:
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"COLORING AUTUMN"
Wyoming surely did miss.....
Trees colored by Nature's kiss.
Bright green trees covered with snow!
Autumn's trees, now white, no color, nor gusto!
First the crayons, then the troops.
My buddies, the squirrels, and the little birds.
"Hey fellows.....Autumn this year droops!
Trees must be colored, requires balancing wizards!"
"I'll do the bottom half where I can reach.
'Tis different colored crayon I'm giving you each
Now.....Sparrows, Crows, and Chickadees.....
Please color each leaf, top-half of all the trees."
"Swinging squirrels, get all the leaves in between.
Please watch your chatter, nothing obscene!
My dear little ants hiding below.....
Could you please help us, please give it go?"
"The Lilac bushes, and the hollyhocks need color.
Such diligent workers, like no other!
Is everyone ready? On the count of three......
One, two, three, go...for warmth a little nip of brandy!"
There were "Swaying Birds" from the tree tops.
"Tipsy Squirrels" flying, and fought lots!
I toppled off my stool, broke the bird seed feeder!
Newspaper called it "The Slippery Colored Venture!"
Can't find the "Plastered Ants," where did they go?
Hiding under the Lilac bush drinking bromo!
The crayon named "Slightly Sober Summer"
has been renamed.....
It's new label: "Autumn's Colors Blackballed!"
Dreaming in our drunken stupors.....we could see.....
Autumn's crayons colored each and every leaf.
Beauteous bountiful shades waiting for your critique.
Would you like to take a peak?
Grand Teton Peaks of Wyoming framed by Autumn's trees!
Created by
LovingCritters
ConSue
"Autumn burned brightly, a running flame through
the mountains, a torch flung to the trees!"
~Faith Baldwin~
American Author
"I wasn't drunk....She lies!"
"Hic-cup!!!"
"Sober Squirrel Smiles!"
Copyright ©
lovingcritters
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2004-09-23 02:10:45]
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Re: COLORING AUTUMN
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by Ilhar on
Thursday, 23rd September 2004 @ 02:24:46 AM AEST
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cute a morning brightener...did you make sure the squirrels were of age to drink?
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Re: COLORING AUTUMN
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 23rd September 2004 @ 03:35:55 AM AEST
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This is delightful and you all did a wonderful job. Did you save me a little nip? Absolutely charming poem.
:Hugs,
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Re: COLORING AUTUMN
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by AspenGlow on
Thursday, 23rd September 2004 @ 04:09:08 AM AEST
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Sweet poem, had to look twice........sleeping squirel looked like my mirror... thanks for the smiles.
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Re: COLORING AUTUMN
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by Stitch on
Thursday, 23rd September 2004 @ 08:01:09 AM AEST
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Consue,
I can just picture you with your little army of squirrels running around Wyoming. This is wonderful and hilarious. I hope you have the most INCREDIBLE spring to make up for your lack of autumn color.
Stitch |
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Re: COLORING AUTUMN
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by venkat on
Thursday, 23rd September 2004 @ 08:05:37 AM AEST
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what a delightful work on animal kingdom..
very pleasant my dear friend..:-) venkat |
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Re: COLORING AUTUMN
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by BrandySwanson on
Thursday, 23rd September 2004 @ 08:55:22 AM AEST
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Absolutely wonderful. loved the pictures of the squirrels and I very much enjoyed the read. thanks for sharing this one.
Brandy |
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Re: COLORING AUTUMN
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 23rd September 2004 @ 11:16:58 AM AEST
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Consue....:)
Here you go again, bringing a smile to my face.
The trees here are just starting to change...there is still time.. I'll save a spot on a bench for you and we can watch together. Such a beautiful time of the year! |
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Re: COLORING AUTUMN
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by shelby on
Thursday, 23rd September 2004 @ 02:06:17 PM AEST
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ahhhhhhhhh this is adorable Conni! Hold on they might still change colors
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Re: COLORING AUTUMN
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by emystar on
Friday, 24th September 2004 @ 08:15:59 PM AEST
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Very creative cute write.
Hope u guys don't have a hang over.
luv the graphics.
luv, huggs, smiles,
yo brat
emy |
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