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Pieces of Yesterday
Contributed by
deadheadpoet
on
Thursday, 23rd September 2004 @ 12:53:44 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Broken pieces of
yesterday, painfully
lacerating at my soul
today.
Reminders of
days long past,
viciously cut
as I pass.
So close but yet
so distant
Years and years have gone.
Pieces of
yesterday still seem
to linger on.
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deadheadpoet
... [
2004-09-23 00:53:44]
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Re: Pieces of Yesterday
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by AspenGlow on
Thursday, 23rd September 2004 @ 01:08:50 AM AEST
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Perfectly said, how come time seems to stand still in our minds.
I like this one very much. Thank you for sharing. |
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Re: Pieces of Yesterday
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by Whisper on
Thursday, 23rd September 2004 @ 01:18:03 AM AEST
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Good write. I can relate.
Whisper |
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Re: Pieces of Yesterday
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 23rd September 2004 @ 01:25:23 AM AEST
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Very good. Thanks for sharing.
Jeni |
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Re: Pieces of Yesterday
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by Dorian on
Thursday, 23rd September 2004 @ 03:51:13 PM AEST
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4 get the tittle, i was nailed by this poem, wow, u r
a master carpenter, yesterday is where i spend most of my time nice 2 see someone else does, don't u just hate when people say u shouldn't dwell in the past? lol, thank u 4 sharing this fine peice of writting . . . Dorian : ) |
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Re: Pieces of Yesterday
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 2nd August 2010 @ 12:56:56 AM AEST
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Damn, I know those feelings!!! Can't say I enjoyed all of them but some of them, yeah. I have a problem of remembering the good and the bad. Nicely done, Laurabeemster.
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