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half dead half alive..................
Contributed by
veenu
on
Wednesday, 22nd September 2004 @ 11:56:12 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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you walk miles,
leaving me half dead half alive.............
still with this pain i am there,
waiting for u and a fear,
that u will here..........
come before everything come to an end............
why u have pretend,
that u r in love,
why u said u will here all the time........................
u will care....................
shame on me shame on ur love.........................
everything now come to an end..............
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2004-09-22 23:56:12] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: half dead half alive..................
(User Rating: 1 ) by emystar on
Tuesday, 8th March 2005 @ 06:22:38 AM AEST (User
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Another sad one but keep writting.
huggs,
emy |
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