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A Night in the park
Contributed by
Lilman
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Sunday, 10th November 2002 @ 06:00:00 AM in AEST
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You glance at me in the dim light, a spakle glimmers in your eye when I look at you.
The sun sinks lower behind the trees and darkness begins to settle over us.
I stand up to walk away, and you slowly rise up, until your eye to eye with me.
You kiss me.
Confused, I pull away.
You divert your eyes from my stare and begin walking to the car.
Copyright ©
Lilman
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2002-11-10 06:00:00]
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Re: A Night in the park
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by lil_angel on
Sunday, 10th November 2002 @ 07:35:08 AM AEST
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| This is a good write. |
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Re: A Night in the park
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by OreO on
Sunday, 10th November 2002 @ 10:20:44 AM AEST
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Aww this is so romantic
and so sad at the same time
I enjoyed reading this one
Keep em' coming
I want to read more of your
poetry. Thanks for sharing
.::´¯`·..· OreO·..·´¯`::.
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Re: A Night in the park
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by LostDream on
Sunday, 17th November 2002 @ 03:20:32 AM AEST
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From a simple situation you have been able to turn it into a touching and beautiful poem.Thank you!
Sara |
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