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Trapped Within
Contributed by
lanna047
on
Wednesday, 22nd September 2004 @ 09:45:11 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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on the outside
what you may see
this act I put on
is not the real me
trapped within
hidden inside me
a spirit wants out
trying to break free
but fears don't permit
so well I've been trained
I walk on eggshells
my courage has been stained
the past that haunts
and invades the present
to stifle the future
making it less than pleasant
I am my own prisoner
as well as my own warden
in this cell I've been held
shut away and hidden
somewhere lies the key
for these locks, it'll fit
but if it were to be found
would I even recognize it?
Copyright ©
lanna047
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2004-09-22 21:45:11]
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Re: Trapped Within
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by Essentially9 on
Wednesday, 22nd September 2004 @ 09:54:52 PM AEST
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| amazing write. |
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Re: Trapped Within
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by kidpoet_213 on
Wednesday, 22nd September 2004 @ 10:32:43 PM AEST
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Ahhh... I very good write... I don't think it's so strange at all... you should see whee some of my inspiration is from LOL!
~Donna~ |
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Re: Trapped Within
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by PoeticMystery on
Wednesday, 22nd September 2004 @ 10:58:20 PM AEST
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| Ah, Very Awesome...I can definitely relate..I wrote one before called "Stranger in My Body"...NICE ! |
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Re: Trapped Within
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by Whisper on
Thursday, 23rd September 2004 @ 01:56:02 AM AEST
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Wow thats a pretty deep write. I hope you will find strength in being free and clear about who you are and loving yourself being so.
Whisper |
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