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22 Years: Let's Call It Quits
Contributed by
xafflictedx
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Wednesday, 22nd September 2004 @ 08:59:52 PM in AEST
Topic:
AnniversaryPoems
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Split.
What once was,
Gone.
Time didn't split.
Oh no.
It shattered,
Turning into tiny slivers
Of memories.
The pieces forgotten,
Left untouched.
They've been deemed,
"BEYOND REPAIR"
So buy two more
And forget.
Copyright ©
xafflictedx
... [
2004-09-22 20:59:52] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: 22 Years: Let's Call It Quits
(User Rating: 1 ) by monophobic on
Wednesday, 22nd September 2004 @ 09:05:41 PM AEST (User
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i can tell there is a lot of emotion in this poem! well written |
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Re: 22 Years: Let's Call It Quits
(User Rating: 1 ) by deadreckoning1983 on
Tuesday, 28th September 2004 @ 12:19:05 AM AEST (User
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hey don't let mom see this!!! she would freak out. anyway, a very good and very strong write. reads pretty good too. |
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Re: 22 Years: Let's Call It Quits
(User Rating: 1 ) by eyesxcriedxout1989 on
Saturday, 13th November 2004 @ 08:56:13 PM AEST (User
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There is emotion, in its most raw form, pouring out of this poem and down around my feet...I think I'll go get a mop...awesome write though
Mason |
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Re: 22 Years: Let's Call It Quits
(User Rating: 1 ) by Winter_Mist2004 on
Sunday, 3rd April 2005 @ 02:23:35 PM AEST (User
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Awesome poem! I love it so much emotion...
-Much love,
Wintermist2004 |
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