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Those Unlucky B***ards
Contributed by
xafflictedx
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Wednesday, 22nd September 2004 @ 08:54:22 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Caught in the middle.
Not by choice. Not by contract.
Just the same, they're trapped.
Hit from one or the other.
The bullets smiling, uninvited,
Making acquaintances
Face-to-face, so to speak.
And boots toss them aside,
Filling in holes and ditches.
Then wiping themselves clean
Before marching on and on and on.
Copyright ©
xafflictedx
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2004-09-22 20:54:22]
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Re: Those Unlucky B***ards
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by deadreckoning1983 on
Tuesday, 28th September 2004 @ 12:16:08 AM AEST
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| God, those poor pitiful b***ards. it's true though, they are only boots and jackets and guns. excellent write. |
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Re: Those Unlucky B***ards
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by theMoth on
Thursday, 7th October 2004 @ 04:11:19 PM AEST
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This little poem
has a lot of great
images in it,
attached to some
very applaudable
sentiments.
Well done.
--Mothy |
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Re: Those Unlucky B***ards
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by cuddlytiger17 on
Tuesday, 12th October 2004 @ 09:21:53 PM AEST
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| So very true. It's sad how the world works and how people can just continue on as if nothing ever occurred, as if those people never existed. = |
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Re: Those Unlucky B***ards
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by eyesxcriedxout1989 on
Saturday, 13th November 2004 @ 08:53:20 PM AEST
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So sad, so true, so awesome...great job hurr
Mason |
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