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A Fond Farewell
Contributed by
xafflictedx
on
Wednesday, 22nd September 2004 @ 08:47:52 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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Fleeting. Failing. Falling away.
Shifting in the sand.
Blowing like chaff in the wind.
The dismal sight of perpetual defeat.
But who cares?
Where is the line drawn?
Empty vessels laughing in denial.
Laughing, laughing, killing.
Tales of a forbidden past.
Shadows of a future lost.
Farewell...
Copyright ©
xafflictedx
... [
2004-09-22 20:47:52]
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Re: A Fond Farewell
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by Essentially9 on
Wednesday, 22nd September 2004 @ 09:13:04 PM AEST
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| excellent write. intriguing. well perspective is everything, but in the end does it really matter if people see it like you do? |
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Re: A Fond Farewell
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by deadreckoning1983 on
Tuesday, 28th September 2004 @ 12:13:08 AM AEST
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doobastank this was awesome. i love how you see things and how you write, love you bro,
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Re: A Fond Farewell
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by eyesxcriedxout1989 on
Saturday, 13th November 2004 @ 08:50:45 PM AEST
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I really liked this...the imagery was awesome...sorta hidden, but once you delve deep into the poem, its amazingly good
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