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Flames
Contributed by
sid_the_tampon_fairy
on
Wednesday, 22nd September 2004 @ 06:26:57 PM in AEST
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AngryPoetry
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You see me in the hall
You don't even know my name
You point and laugh and whisper
About things you never knew
Pass it on to friends
The fire begins to spread
Burn into the ears of the willing
The flame explodes like wildfire
So everyone knows my problems
Or so they say
You think you know me
Better than me?
Tell me how to live?
Don't preach what you don't practice
Don't look down on me
Because you think you know
You don't and you won't
Get out of my face
And out of my way
Flame causes damage
Only you can prevent forest fires...
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2004-09-22 18:26:57]
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Re: Flames
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by RhythmBndt on
Wednesday, 22nd September 2004 @ 06:39:38 PM AEST
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| Nice use of the metaphor :) Great write. |
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Re: Flames
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by Sirena_Degana on
Wednesday, 22nd September 2004 @ 07:56:08 PM AEST
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u suck jess! i was like yeah fire..newayz
hey gorgeous Holly #4...this is awesome the metaphor u used well also.. great write!!!! hey guess what..I'M SINGLE..hehe..lol good poem hon and you say ur better then me ;) uh huh sure..love ya girl
blessed be
Holly #1 ~charlie~ |
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Re: Flames
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by Essentially9 on
Wednesday, 22nd September 2004 @ 08:19:42 PM AEST
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| excellent write. i loved this. very nice style. and a classic ending to top it all off. =] |
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