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The Raven
Contributed by
PhantomsLDY
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Saturday, 9th November 2002 @ 10:00:00 PM in AEST
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The Raven is black as night
But, her heart remains pure
She is always misunderstood
Her motives are always in question
She is seen as the dark messenger
That is far from the truth
Her messages come from above
They are laced with truth and love
They may not always be happy
But they are the truth
She bears no feelings of spite nor malice
She makes no judgements of right or wrong
Her lonely voice echoes her hearts song
She spends her nights singing alone
She doesn't think of the future or the past
She only thinks of her given task
She spreads her wings and takes flight
For another dark and lonely night
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PhantomsLDY
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2002-11-09 22:00:00]
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Re: The Raven
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by lil_angel on
Sunday, 10th November 2002 @ 04:58:33 AM AEST
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| good write |
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Re: The Raven
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by Ramfire on
Saturday, 11th January 2003 @ 12:31:07 PM AEST
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You are mysterious, Raven. From whence cometh thee?
Regards,
Ramfire |
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Re: The Raven
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by ladyfawn on
Thursday, 23rd January 2003 @ 11:53:32 PM AEST
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| love this one.. very lovely, my best to you and yours and plz tell Phantom thank you again for the beautiful poem for Robert:) huggs Nessa |
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Re: The Raven
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by LadyDama on
Wednesday, 19th February 2003 @ 03:19:06 AM AEST
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| beautiful imagery... ironically, i refer to my husband in several poems as a raven... they are very loyal and given to the task at hand... very precious poem... |
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Re: The Raven
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 14th September 2003 @ 05:14:02 PM AEST
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| Another beautiful write!! The truth in your words screams volumes!! |
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