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Bipolar
Contributed by
PsykoticDoll
on
Wednesday, 22nd September 2004 @ 05:42:25 PM in AEST
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Constantly up and down
Never knowing what’s next,
Waking up to those mistakes
You wish you didn’t make.
Can’t handle me anymore
At least I’m not alone there,
Completely overwhelmed
Nothing an overdose can’t fix.
Faking smiles to seem alright
Almost becomes part of you,
Trying to protect everyone
From a world that is your hell.
Walking along that fine line
One you never get away from,
As people point and laugh
And you promise revenge.
Suicide seems the only way out
But you’ve never completed it,
Maybe one of these days,
You’ll just happen to get it right.
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PsykoticDoll
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2004-09-22 17:42:25]
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Re: Bipolar
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by Bohemian_with_a_pen on
Wednesday, 22nd September 2004 @ 06:59:56 PM AEST
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| OMG i SOOOOOOOO hear ya! awesome poem, u hav gr8 talent! |
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Re: Bipolar
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by kidpoet_213 on
Wednesday, 22nd September 2004 @ 07:43:35 PM AEST
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It's good that u can write about it! Hang in there!!! are u on any meds for his condition? If so that's great... u can get it under control... Great write... u have an excepional way with words...
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Re: Bipolar
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by Whisper on
Thursday, 23rd September 2004 @ 02:09:56 AM AEST
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I too share this. It gets better to deal with eventfully. :-) I find writing here helps .
Whisper
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