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To Lie Beside Heaven
Contributed by
AndTheFoolShallBurn
on
Wednesday, 22nd September 2004 @ 05:27:16 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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I miss you, I won't lie.
Feeling your breathing beside me, our souls entwined. The rush of your heartbeat telling me you're there, the way sunlight glints off your shoulder.
The comfort of perfection, the complimentary curves. The way we fit together and made my puzzle whole.
Suffering it brought me, well worth the risk. If I'd have known how good you'd feel, I would have been so close. Instant memories, caught inside you.
Your hands, touching my face, the look inside your eyes. The words, spoken in my ear, your breath inside my spine. Hearing the words during a moment made them seem like so much more.
The comfort, the perfection, the complimentary curves. You fit with me and made my puzzle whole.
Now pieces need mending.
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2004-09-22 17:27:16] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: To Lie Beside Heaven
(User Rating: 1 ) by Essentially9 on
Wednesday, 22nd September 2004 @ 08:43:23 PM AEST (User
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excellent write. i liked the puzzle analogy in this. |
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Re: To Lie Beside Heaven
(User Rating: 1 ) by Deleterious_Dislike on
Monday, 18th October 2004 @ 12:26:35 PM AEST (User
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I think this deserves a 4 and a half
But the layout could be better once more |
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