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Twisted Emotion
Contributed by
PsykoticDoll
on
Wednesday, 22nd September 2004 @ 05:26:57 PM in AEST
Topic:
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I’m in love with you
But the words don’t fit,
Can’t make it sound right
Although not sure why.
You make me smile
Life seems worth living,
Everything’s faded
It‘s all about us.
Not what you’re looking for
Too distant these days,
Feelings aren’t returned
Trying to make sense.
Our long talks for hours
Connecting once again,
As if you’re beside me
So many miles away.
If these seem like two poems
It’s because I’m torn inside,
Part of me feels happy
While part of me has died.
Copyright ©
PsykoticDoll
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2004-09-22 17:26:57]
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Re: Twisted Emotion
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by kidpoet_213 on
Wednesday, 22nd September 2004 @ 05:59:21 PM AEST
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Yeah... I can relate to this ... all the twisted emotion of years gone by and u see the person again... yeah...
Good write... pulled feeling to the surface... I thought were long since buried... guess not...
Thanks fo sharing
~Donna~ |
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Re: Twisted Emotion
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by Essentially9 on
Wednesday, 22nd September 2004 @ 08:45:08 PM AEST
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| excellent write. very emotional. well some things cant begin again, and are left best that way. |
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