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black emerald daze
Contributed by
Lee
on
Wednesday, 22nd September 2004 @ 04:15:30 PM in AEST
Topic:
mystical
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The deflated
Black balloon
We made Our Own
Way through the ruins
We found many fluids
And were attacked
By liquid goons
There's an
Old saying:
At the intersection
That intersects
With parallel minds
Stagecoach driver
Eats up
All the
Attention it
Can find
An odd desert phrase
Ought to catch some raze
Black emerald daze
Copyright ©
Lee
... [
2004-09-22 16:15:30]
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Re: black emerald daze
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by Broken_Skin on
Wednesday, 22nd September 2004 @ 04:24:31 PM AEST
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The meaning i could not see but
non the less, very interesting
4/5
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Re: black emerald daze
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by waos on
Wednesday, 22nd September 2004 @ 07:03:59 PM AEST
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ya it sounded awesome... i'm wondering at your meaning behind it too... take a minute if you would and PM me and let me know what you mean in it... that would be awesome.
*heads off to read more of your stuff* |
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Re: black emerald daze
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by Ilhar on
Thursday, 23rd September 2004 @ 07:08:36 AM AEST
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made me think (a hard task this early in the morning) well written
Shari |
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