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Walk The Flame
Contributed by
eyesxcriedxout1989
on
Wednesday, 22nd September 2004 @ 04:08:49 PM in AEST
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Adrenaline rising
Heart beating like the drums around you
Walk the Flame, young one
Become a man
The flames rise high
And twenty feet in depth
Take your first step
Plunge into the fire
Searing, burning your flesh
Yet, take it slow
Walk the Flame, young one
Halfway through now
Your hair is burnt off
And you are ten steps closer
You try to gasp for breathe
But the flames consume you
Don't give up now
Three more steps
Take it: that one last step
The noise of drum beats
Flood your burning ears
You have walked the Flame
You are now a man
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eyesxcriedxout1989
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2004-09-22 16:08:49]
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Re: Walk The Flame
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 22nd September 2004 @ 05:11:39 PM AEST
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Definately a difficult rite of passage!
This write grips you to the end.
good job. |
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Re: Walk The Flame
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by deadreckoning1983 on
Tuesday, 28th September 2004 @ 12:27:36 AM AEST
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| this was an interesting write....... i don't know what else to say other than that. it was good just kinda random from your torn love pattern, it's nice to see how versatile you can be |
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Re: Walk The Flame
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by theMoth on
Friday, 15th October 2004 @ 05:32:56 PM AEST
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Cool poem.
Very well written.
Like the flame motif.
--Mothy |
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