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Distant Gaze II
Contributed by
poetmarie
on
Wednesday, 22nd September 2004 @ 03:01:49 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Words that won't come
tears overwhelm them
time cheated
moments stolen
promises suspended
as crystals, glimmers
of inspiration and hope
dwell in the gravity of love
to be sucked in or set free
dreams in a dreamcatcher
tears on a pillow
leaving the heart at its will
to restore and give again
what once was lost
Copyright ©
poetmarie
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2004-09-22 15:01:49]
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Re: Distant Gaze II
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by theMoth on
Thursday, 30th September 2004 @ 03:49:49 PM AEST
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I liked the sentiments and
how you intertwined them with
crystals, glimmers, and the
dreamcatcher.
A cool little poem.
--Mothy |
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Re: Distant Gaze II
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by Essentially9 on
Monday, 21st February 2005 @ 04:35:38 PM AEST
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| purely amazing. nothing could be better. |
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