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Ok I Admit
Contributed by
pixie
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Wednesday, 22nd September 2004 @ 01:59:35 PM in AEST
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I get jealous when a pretty woman walks on by,
When I feel weak I sit down & have a good cry,
When I get mad I like a good scream & shout,
When I am feeling low, my head fills with doubt.
I sometimes like in a row to get the last word,
Sometimes I talk the loudest so I am heard,
I can be selfish & not put others before me,
I drink myself stupid when I want to feel free.
Some days it too hard to get out of my bed,
I have thoughts that I’d be better off dead,
I cut my arm when I need some kind of release,
At the slightest thing sometimes I crease.
I can be nasty to the ones who are close,
I treat people like dirt who are meant to mean the most,
When I get angry I spit out my dummy,
I pretend to be a big woman when all I wants my mummy.
I get scared sometimes when you my side,
When I am worried I want to run & hide,
I put on a brave face for the outside world & his wife,
I often wish that I had long ago taken my own life.
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Re: Ok I Admit
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by poetrygodslove on
Wednesday, 22nd September 2004 @ 02:31:06 PM AEST
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| I enjoyed your poem, I enjoyed the thought that I feel like this to sometimes. maybe we all do and it is ok. Alot of us wont admit to anything going on in our lives. and our bad habits. keep them coming. sandy |
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Re: Ok I Admit
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 22nd September 2004 @ 04:16:14 PM AEST
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pixie,
....you never cease to amaze me.
Your highs are high and your lows.....so low.
You have a natural talent for putting your emotions on paper.
Don't stop. |
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Re: Ok I Admit
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by Essentially9 on
Wednesday, 22nd September 2004 @ 10:42:06 PM AEST
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| sadly i can relate to much of this =/ great write as always. |
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Re: Ok I Admit
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by Whisper on
Thursday, 23rd September 2004 @ 02:12:26 AM AEST
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Pixie I am glad you didn't succeed. Stop thinking that. Things will get better. Keep the faith. Peace
Whisper |
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Re: Ok I Admit
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by venkat on
Thursday, 23rd September 2004 @ 08:01:27 AM AEST
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| many sides of life..hope you will be o.k..venkat |
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Re: Ok I Admit
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by liquidsunshine on
Thursday, 23rd September 2004 @ 09:08:14 PM AEST
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The entire first stanza... perfect!
I'm going to run out of ways to tell you how much I love your poetry!
Lots of love and peace be with you,
Chelsea |
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Re: Ok I Admit
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by ladyfawn on
Thursday, 23rd September 2004 @ 10:45:29 PM AEST
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a very human write, i have shared some of these same feelings, but am still here too:) hugs n' love nessa
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