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here i sit
Contributed by
wikedladi
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Wednesday, 22nd September 2004 @ 11:20:57 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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I love you more than words can say
This feeling i have grows stronger everyday
I never dreamed it would feel this way
My love for you will never go astray
Yet here i sit, wondering why
You continue to hurt, you continue to lie
In my sorrow i have learned, learned not to cry
Yet here i sit, i can"t understand why
Was it something i did, or something i said
This is all such a mess, its all screwed in my head
I've tried to be calm, i've tried to be cool
But here i sit, i've been made such a fool
You promised the TRUTH, all i've gotten is lies
well with this final blow my heart slowly starts to die
An inspite of all this, i still can't deny
Here i sit, still wondering why
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wikedladi
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2004-09-22 11:20:57]
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Re: here i sit
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by deathdrop on
Wednesday, 22nd September 2004 @ 11:29:25 AM AEST
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painful feelings i know, 'coz my boy friend did this to me, and even now it still hurts!
you've expressed your self with beauiful rhyme! and the flow is good too.
if venting this way helps then certainly KEEP IT UP!
it works for me, any how.
*hugs*
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Re: here i sit
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by TrowaDaryk on
Saturday, 13th August 2005 @ 02:52:21 PM AEST
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| nice i liked it its one of those poems that everyone somewhere inside can relate too |
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