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what happened with me at night
Contributed by
veenu
on
Wednesday, 22nd September 2004 @ 07:23:22 AM in AEST
Topic:
DreamsandWishes
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when i slept all other things comes to rest,
i watched you,my love as such,
that my fealing burst..................
now after that i come to know or according to my view,
if you watch someone which is close to (in dream)you,
what is next ,
he/she is in your love text..............
if you care,
means something there,
he/she in love sphere,
make the world so that everyone love,
make all to surrender.................................................
love is not love till we give it away...........................
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veenu
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2004-09-22 07:23:22]
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Re: what happened with me at night
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by Kindredblood_dragon on
Wednesday, 22nd September 2004 @ 07:28:21 AM AEST
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Another beautiful write, awesome talent unleashed.
This line hit a note with me
love is not love till we give it away...........................
Sometimes I feel that way like love is only good once it is gone....odd
Awesome poem keep im coming I enjoyed reading. |
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Re: what happened with me at night
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by Hurretje on
Wednesday, 22nd September 2004 @ 07:40:36 AM AEST
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Good poem, with a wise lesson...
Greetz,
Hur
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