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what u do.......
Contributed by
veenu
on
Wednesday, 22nd September 2004 @ 06:59:22 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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imaginations now become truth,
love become curse,
for what iam alive,
plz..........kill me i dont want to go any more mile...........
i am in love,
with you and you jagged a knief within............
plz..kill me with your unfair hand,
because i believe you as i stand...............
my heart broked and pieces of it misplaced,
dull expression on my face,
for that we are no longer at the same place,
and my bad luck u appreciate,
with a laughing face............
not to be on the same gate.......
is it all right no
i RECALL.................................
Copyright ©
veenu
... [
2004-09-22 06:59:22]
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Re: what u do.......
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by Hurretje on
Wednesday, 22nd September 2004 @ 07:06:14 AM AEST
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Your words haunt me... Intens poetry.
Greetz,
Hur |
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Re: what u do.......
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by Kindredblood_dragon on
Wednesday, 22nd September 2004 @ 07:18:24 AM AEST
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Beautifully written and very sad, full on emotions in each word, my only prob with the poem is the spelling, but all in all I found this poem very touching and full of sadness.
Thanks for sharing |
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Re: what u do.......
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by veenu on
Wednesday, 22nd September 2004 @ 11:40:19 PM AEST
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| my girlfriend left me without any big reason plz.............come back................i am waiting for u i cant love someone else....................................i am in love |
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