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Windows of Your Soul
Contributed by
shanarah
on
Wednesday, 22nd September 2004 @ 02:50:32 AM in AEST
Topic:
didactic
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Filled with pride in those deep brown eyes
are windows of your soul
Revealing truth, as the tongue may lie
flirtatious eyes are your role
Eyes talk deeper than any words could
enough mysteries, just truth if you would
lingering expressions as I look back
wasted hours turning blue skies black
Limiting your talents and possibilities
no more the fool, everyone sees
Answers can be found in those eyes that you hold,
time lapsed in fantasy, the truth is now told
I throw this message, directing it your way,
in hope the windows of your soul,
will bring truth to stay
Copyright ©
shanarah
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2004-09-22 02:50:32]
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Re: Windows of Your Soul
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by Hurretje on
Wednesday, 22nd September 2004 @ 03:00:21 AM AEST
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Beautiful poem... there's more to an eye than meets the eye... Well done!
Greetz,
Hur |
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Re: Windows of Your Soul
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by Kindredblood_dragon on
Wednesday, 22nd September 2004 @ 06:12:04 AM AEST
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very well written, awesome subject, the eyes are the very windows to our souls, how many secrets refect from their depths, a mystery.
Beautifully written, I liked this poem. |
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Re: Windows of Your Soul
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 22nd September 2004 @ 07:36:10 AM AEST
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| Great poem, had to read it twice, thought provoking. Thanks..........Mike |
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Re: Windows of Your Soul
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by LouisaMontagu on
Wednesday, 22nd September 2004 @ 10:24:40 AM AEST
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| wow what a wonderful right, eyes dont lie.. well done n thanx for sharing xx louisa |
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Re: Windows of Your Soul
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by Vitreous_Soul on
Sunday, 26th September 2004 @ 05:00:52 AM AEST
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Absolutely exquisite depiction of 'windows of your soul.' Not too many poems can evoke this deep of thought, which makes this a great pleasure to read.
"lingering expressions as I look back
wasted hours turning blue skies black"
"Answers can be found in those eyes that you hold,
time lapsed in fantasy, the truth is now told"
Those lines, especially, are solid gold.
Face-first through a windshield,
-V.S. |
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