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~~:::... Ray Of Light ....:::::~~
Contributed by
Zack_Chamber
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Wednesday, 22nd September 2004 @ 02:32:38 AM in AEST
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I wander About In dark ,
Searching for light .
Roaming here and there ,
But Till Now , I Am Unsuccessful ,
I Tried To Find The Door ,
That Leads To Bright Side ,
A Door To Success ,
A Hope Of Light Some Where ,
Is Still Burning ,
Is Still Shinning ,
A Candle Is Still Left ,
Till Its Burning, I will So,
Work For Others,Work Hard,
I'll Try To Be A Ray Of Hope,
For Those Who Line In dark,
I'll Be A Ray Of Light In Path,
Yes I'll Do So ................
Copyright ©
Zack_Chamber
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2004-09-22 02:32:38]
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Re: ~~:::... Ray Of Light ....:::::~~
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by Hurretje on
Wednesday, 22nd September 2004 @ 03:08:27 AM AEST
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Good poem... Light is so important in this darkening world... Keep shining!
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Re: ~~:::... Ray Of Light ....:::::~~
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by Kindredblood_dragon on
Wednesday, 22nd September 2004 @ 06:16:49 AM AEST
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Awesome poem, it is good to remind us of the need for light in an otherwise blind world......may you shine bright in the times darkness preveils.
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Re: ~~:::... Ray Of Light ....:::::~~
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 22nd September 2004 @ 10:17:22 AM AEST
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Never let your flame die out. It may be but one tiny light in this world but can make or break the lives of others. We in our own ways, most times unknowingly, do make a difference in others lives due to our faith and love and desire to bring happiness and peace to others. This is a great poem.
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Re: ~~:::... Ray Of Light ....:::::~~
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by Row on
Wednesday, 29th December 2004 @ 05:57:50 PM AEST
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| very nice |
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Re: ~~:::... Ray Of Light ....:::::~~
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by Loyalist on
Friday, 31st December 2004 @ 01:29:49 AM AEST
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| A really en-light-ening poem! Nice to have you here. I look forward to more of your poems and watching your progress as a writer. |
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Re: ~~:::... Ray Of Light ....:::::~~
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by darkangeleyes57 on
Tuesday, 28th March 2006 @ 11:19:28 AM AEST
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Nice poem.. I liked it..
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