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WON
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alovinmann
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Tuesday, 21st September 2004 @ 09:08:38 PM in AEST
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A frosted glass I peer into
Reflects a vision oh so true
I wipe away what blocks my eyes
The vision takes form and i start to surmise
Time was spent so restlessly
You do what you thinks right
Your hand in mind
Put your troubles at ease
Won't let you cry tonight
My precious one
i cherish you
In our short time
What we've been through
I know it's rough
I know how hard it seems
Soft clouds are made
Of wasted broken dreams
Then there's times
You loose you glue
That's when I hold you tight
Spread your wings
I wanna fly with you
Won't let you cry tonight
Stumbleing over the stepping stones
I heard your fears
I felt you moans
Open your eyes you've never been there before
Walking so gently
On a smoother softer shore
If i knew once
What I know Now
Perseption or plain hindsight
Hold you close
And take you there
Won't let you cry tonight
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Re: WON
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by Alovinmann on
Tuesday, 21st September 2004 @ 09:11:57 PM AEST
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| THE TITLE IS WON"T LET YOU CRY TONIGHT NOT WON!!!!! |
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Re: WON
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by norticus on
Tuesday, 21st September 2004 @ 09:12:58 PM AEST
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3 on the Nortiscale.
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Re: WON
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by Essentially9 on
Tuesday, 21st September 2004 @ 10:22:25 PM AEST
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| very nice. yes i was wondering about the title and its correlation to this. =] keep up the great work. |
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Re: WON
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 22nd September 2004 @ 03:22:24 AM AEST
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Shazammmnnn!
A heavenly masterpeice of beauty, so tender, devoted, all them good things that most women long for. U also restore my faith in men.....I hope this person knows what they have in u.
I could go on alnite but it's awesome makes one all tingly inside.
luv, huggs, smiles,
emy |
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Re: WON
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by Kindredblood_dragon on
Wednesday, 22nd September 2004 @ 07:42:09 AM AEST
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Beautifully tender song, I wish I could write some vivid and heart felt emotions as you do...I enjoyed the song.
Take care |
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Re: WON
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by ladyfawn on
Thursday, 23rd September 2004 @ 09:35:06 PM AEST
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truely beautiful:) hugs n' love nessa x
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