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PAIN
Contributed by
MoonbeamBaby
on
Tuesday, 21st September 2004 @ 08:31:23 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Things I once Knew are gone
Theres nothing left here
Sadly the darkness makes me foregone
Only one lonesome tear
Darkness follows my happy days
pain lingers here, watching me
As I stumble down a dark hallway
One light flickers dimly
pain it is always nonstop
It drags on forever tearing us into
Pain left me on a rocky hill top
Pain is something you cant undo
Pain follows the happy ones
It made my life living hell
Pain will lengthen its lessons
It never leaves and stays to dwell
Copyright ©
MoonbeamBaby
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2004-09-21 20:31:23]
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Re: PAIN
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by norticus on
Tuesday, 21st September 2004 @ 08:34:08 PM AEST
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| This is goofy and if it's the worst part of your life then you have yet to live. It's almost like 2 different poems held together by masking tape and yes I said masking tape because duct tape would have worked better. I give this a 3.4 on the Nortiscale. |
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Re: PAIN
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by Essentially9 on
Tuesday, 21st September 2004 @ 10:39:07 PM AEST
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| excellent write. i posted a poem about pain last night, it seems everyone is writing poems on pain lately. well pain eventually passes or changes in intensity somewhat. pain makes you stronger, i guess thats the only good in it. |
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