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The Apology
Contributed by
toadsprincess
on
Tuesday, 21st September 2004 @ 07:01:18 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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I am sorry I never called
and that I never did better.
I am sorry I was not there when you first crawled,
and for never answering that letter.
I am sorry I never taught you how to skate
and for leaving you all alone.
I am sorry I was not there on your first date,
and for never picking up the phone!!!
I am sorry I was not there when you turned sixteen,
and when you learned to drive.
I am sorry for being so mean,
and acting like your not alive.
I am sorry for not seeing you dance,
and for missing that graduation.
I am sorry for always taking a chance,
and saying I did not get the invitation!
I am sorry for all these things,
and for putting them of till another time.
Copyright ©
toadsprincess
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2004-09-21 19:01:18]
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Re: The Apology
(User Rating: 1 )
by Sirena_Degana on
Tuesday, 21st September 2004 @ 07:30:00 PM AEST
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A great apology that should be said.....I think you did a good job of expressing this too...no hurt feelings.....towards him....
blessed be
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Re: The Apology
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by norticus on
Tuesday, 21st September 2004 @ 08:42:16 PM AEST
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The "porme" poetry is truly bore me poetry, that said, this one has its rhyme and I think that some thought should go into writing and rhyming takes thought. I'll put a point on for that. Although, there are no mreal good metaphors here and I adore metaphor, you did write from the perspective of someone else and that's creative too. You did post it on the internet putting yourself up for criticism and that gets a point too. No misspellings that gets a third of a point. I didn't enjoy it so no points for my pleasure and no points because of my similar experiences. So you get a 3.3 on the Nortiscale.
norticus
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