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Falling In Love
Contributed by
Willofree
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Tuesday, 21st September 2004 @ 06:41:29 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Stolen side glances
Peeks from the corner of my eye
awkward with no direct advances
Shy and bashful was I
Not exactly the direct approach
Stomach would fill with butterflies
Often time I felt I needed a coach
On my own volition I could not rely
Watch you walk down the hall
Like a kid playing hide-and-go-seek
No conversation at all
Advances were really weak
Swivel of your hips I do recall
You turned and caught me in my stare
You smiled and continued down the hall
I blushed, but the smile was nice to share
Heart was racing with sweaty palm
Such an affect you had on me
Take me a few minutes to calm
I was very inept you see
Work was my excuse to converse
I would avoid running ito you
Would sit in my office and rehearse
Fantasizing about us as two
You initiated conversation with me
I felt this swirling hoard of emotions
It felt like the raging sea
Excited with this emotional commotion
Story has a happy ending
together as man and wife today
Had it been left to my attending
Would have gotten lost along the way
Thanks for hanging in there hon
One of us needed to take the lead
We become merged as two into one
It's working, as I took heed
Copyright ©
Willofree
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2004-09-21 18:41:29]
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Re: Falling In Love
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by Sirena_Degana on
Tuesday, 21st September 2004 @ 07:21:17 PM AEST
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oh absolutely beautiful and very captivating..i wish i could use psychedilic to describe it but it doesn't quite fit..well good luck to the two of you..if there is....anwayz..
blessed be
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Re: Falling In Love
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by Spazzo on
Tuesday, 21st September 2004 @ 08:49:47 PM AEST
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| Outstanding. |
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Re: Falling In Love
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by Nazmythian on
Wednesday, 22nd September 2004 @ 01:07:35 AM AEST
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They continue to get better and better. Well written, with good flow. A beautiful recount of naievity. I remember those days. *****
Nazmythian ~ |
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Re: Falling In Love
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by ladyfawn on
Tuesday, 28th September 2004 @ 09:17:48 PM AEST
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ohhhh, this is so sweet:) hugs n' love nessa
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Re: Falling In Love
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by eatfresh22 on
Thursday, 14th October 2004 @ 04:18:46 PM AEST
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Awe, how cute. I really enjoyed this. Sweet, innocent love. True love! That makes me smile. I love the child-like touch to this. Good work!
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Re: Falling In Love
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by emystar on
Friday, 28th January 2005 @ 06:48:19 PM AEST
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Jus heavenly beautifull.
huggs,
emy |
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