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Opeth
Contributed by
Opium
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Saturday, 9th November 2002 @ 02:30:00 PM in AEST
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Hush my delicate flower, no need to cry that much
It's just a little taste of sour and my gentle touch
I welcome you to my abyss of dark and gloom
Back where you were born, inside mother earth's womb
Don't screem that much! the others are still sleeping
Your beloved ones may be above, but they can't hear you weeping
Just shut your pretty eyes and die
You are alone now, but please don't cry
They told you about angels and heaven in the skies
Now you're in my realm, away from those bitter lies
The earth worms will soon eat your rotten skin
And penetrate your flesh, penetrating deep within
Sleep my love as you lay beside me
Stay close to me, right where I want you to be
Lay your well shaped bones in my eternal bed
And in my arms you still live, even thou you're dead
Mourn no more, your soul has long departed
Just hate me as much as you can, I'm a hollow hearted
Live with me away from world's riches and wealth
My name is Opeth ...the name of death.
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Opium
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2002-11-09 14:30:00]
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Re: Opeth
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by OreO on
Saturday, 9th November 2002 @ 04:34:39 PM AEST
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This is scary lol
Wow this needs to be
a scary movie or somthing
it's a wonderful write
alot of creativeness in it
Thanks for sharing this one
Keep em' coming
.::´¯`·..· OreO·..·´¯`::.
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Re: Opeth
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 9th November 2002 @ 10:22:55 PM AEST
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| How sweet! |
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Re: Opeth
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by Rakerman1999 on
Sunday, 10th November 2002 @ 03:43:56 AM AEST
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The only thing I dont like about this is the fact I didnt write it myself! lol Great work Opium.!
Larry |
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Re: Opeth
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by DreamWeaver on
Sunday, 10th November 2002 @ 07:30:48 AM AEST
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| Great poem. Scary stuff! |
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Re: Opeth
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 10th November 2002 @ 11:20:50 PM AEST
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| Chilling content, very well written! |
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Re: Opeth
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 11th November 2002 @ 12:43:57 AM AEST
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This is scary lol
Wow this needs to be
a scary movie or somthing
it's a wonderful write
alot of creativeness in it
Thanks for sharing this one
Keep em' coming .......Gina |
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