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Call Me Crazy
Contributed by
calista
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Tuesday, 21st September 2004 @ 05:43:21 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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Call Me Crazy
September 21, 2004
Thinking I am different,
That is how my life went,
Watching others live,
Wondering what I'd have to give.
Under the glass,
Eyes always watching me
I caved into the corners,
Refusing all your orders.
Falling through the web of black
Past only sounds, for sight I lack
In every moments past.
In staring at my own hands longer
I can hear the rushing of my blood
Pumping stronger
And the harder I look, the more I concentrate
The louder the roar, the more irate.
And a sudden stop leaves me swaying
In silence with no blood
And shrinking veins
I cannot see, but I feel them constricting
Tighter and collapsing in a tunnel emptied
Dry and burning just under my skin.
When the eyes stop watching, and I stop falling
And my blood is no longer a river,
And the commands are ceased,
My veins no longer give, and it seems I am released
My vision gets hazy
And they call me crazy
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calista
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Re: Call Me Crazy
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by Bohemian_with_a_pen on
Wednesday, 22nd September 2004 @ 02:39:10 AM AEST
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| awesome! this is great, u hav such talent |
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Re: Call Me Crazy
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by NightOwl on
Tuesday, 29th March 2005 @ 05:30:57 PM AEST
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Awesome! Lots of emotion in this piece... write more, please! You have a lot of talent.
*~Erin~* |
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